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Day 96 - Love
Silently it bites
Sneaking in under your skin
Igniting your heart
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Day 95 - Sorrow
As the pain sets in
it works its way to your heart
Rainclouds of sorrow
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Day 94 - Robin
Cheerfully singing
A red-breasted robin lands
Upon the rose bush
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Memoirs of an Elemental - Chapter 18
 
 
Chapter 18 – If Only He Knew
 
 
        Merrick let out a heavy sigh and looked me deep in the eyes.  “OK, I admit my heart skips a beat whenever you look at me.  But I’m also terrified because you and I are from different worlds.  Maybe it is love that I feel for you, but I can’t help but worry you don’t feel the same about me, that I’m just some....”
        I lunged forwards and wrapped my arms around him, bringing my lips against his, kissing him deeply.  He wanted to know how I felt, so I showed him.  I’d never kissed anyone before, so I didn’t really know what I’d feel, but it quickly turned from a curious act into something…more.  As his cool lips rubbed gently against mine, I felt an electric tickle that seemed to ignite my soul, turning it from a simple and steady flame, into a raging inferno
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Day 93 - Loki
Malicious trickster
Sits chained to three jagged rocks
Laughter turned to screams
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Day 92 - Thor
Sky ripped asunder
As he beats his great hammer
Giants meet their end
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Day 91 - December
Sparkling crystal white
A land blanketed in snow
A child's eager grin
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Day 90 - November
The ninth door opens
To a night's sky set ablaze
Multi coloured fire 
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Memoirs of an Elemental - Chapter 17
 
 
Chapter 17 – Road Trip
 
 
        I woke up in a daze, with something warm and furry snuggled up in my arms.  Looking down, I waited for my eyes to adjust to the dark, just as the thing by my side suddenly moved.  I jerked away from it and saw what it was, a small orange fox, staring up at me with cat-like eyes.  Instantly recognising it as the one that killed the policeman, my heart began racing within my chest.  I considered jumping off the bed, but the Fox just looked up at me and yawned, before moving forwards and licking my hand.
        “Err, good fox?” I mused, hoping that it continued to stay friendly.
        “Her name is Nixie,” Lilith explained, as she flicked a light on by one of the crates. “And it seems she likes you.”
        I observed
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Day 89 - October
Sweet Crimson Sorrow
Tears of scarlet memories
Trickle into rust
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Day 88 - September
A feast fit for kings
Hobbits singing and dancing
Gandalf's fireworks
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Day 87 - August
Ocean of Yellow
Sunflowers see no shadows
Smiling at the sun
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Day 86 - July
Glittering gold sands
A sea of mirrored turquoise
Sweet summer dreams
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Home
Lily finished her painting and stepped back.
"I'm home." She whispered, climbing through the canvas to where her mother waited.
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Chapter is coming out today, fret not! I just wanted to make it extra streamlined. :D
Thu May 11, 2017, 11:41 AM
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I can't believe we're stuck on a cliffhanger where we are unsure if Merrick will ever drink coffee again :O :D
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Hello! This shout box doesn't get used enough!
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Just want to say hi again :D
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Why do I never see your good mornings till later! Geez, I suck sometimes. haha
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I thought it´s time for another happy Good Morning here :D
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Good Morning! ;)
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Just want to say Good Morning :)
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Spam away, I appreciate your enthusiasm :D
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...I just realized that I am totall spamming your profile... :D
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YAY! I like surprises!
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Surprise incoming ;)
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I am crrraaaaavvvviiiing for a new chapter, sir!
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Nice chess board, very elaborate and fancy! ;)
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Mark
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Hello and thanks for stopping by! My name's Mark, I pretty much spend all my time writing fiction stories (Fantasy and Sci-Fi) as well as creating whimsical Poems. I've been writing for over 8 years, and I'm currently in the final stages of editing a teen fiction fantasy novel, prior to seeking publication. If you've had a look around (which I encourage you to do so, if you haven't already), then you'll likely have noticed my weekly running story "Memoirs of an Elemental" (I know, I know...Its a bit of a mouthful). Anyway...every Thursday I deliver another chapter for everyone on here to read. It's a fantasy story with delightful bouts of action, romance and of course, elementals! (Honestly, what is not to love about that eh?) A word of advice though, read chapter 1 first! (Seriously, who jumps straight into chapter 3? No wonder you're confused about what's going on).

Also, in my spare time (Haha, spare time....that's a cute notion) I dabble with photography. Oh who am I kidding, I say I dabble but I bought a Cannon 500D a few years back, so I guess its more serious than mere dabbling (now that i'm reading this, dabble is a funny word when used consecutively) OK, back on track because I'm aware I'm now waffling. So photography, yes, so...I focus mainly on nature, landscapes and Macro photography. Although, I'd love to learn how to take portraits and personal photos of people.

I am up for working on commissions and collaborations. Perhaps you're an artist who is seeking someone to help write a story for your comic, or you need someone to create a poem. Whatever it is, give me a shout and I'm sure I can help you out (oh look, it rhymes!). I am also happy to do Critiques and offer writing and photography advice, so don't be shy!
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Sorry if I'm a little quiet lately, I'm trying not to melt in this disgusting heat. I'm used to colder climes, that's for sure. Currently I'm sitting at my reception desk, with the air con on low. 😂
I'm stuck with a slight dilemma. Do I continue the next chapter from Merricks point of view, or do I switch back to Lilith? I'm somewhat torn, because on the one hand, I'm tempted to keep her motives secret till the next few chapters, but she also has a so much story and insight to offer. I also feel it would bring the reader closer to her as a character, as they start to understand why she does what she does. I'm at two minds, so perhaps you guys may be able to wiegh in your thoughts and help me decide.
I'm just in the middle of writing Chapter 17 and I have to admit, Lilith is far more mischievous than I first thought. I couldn't help but laugh as she tortures poor Merrick. As if he hasn't been through enough as it is, he now lands into her teasing clutches.

The more I write about her, the more I fall in love with her character.  She's a total delight to write about and a breath of fresh air.  It also makes total sense to me that Merrick would fall for her charming yet mysterious nature. He needs someone like her to pick him up and give him a sense of direction, a new life so to say.  

Sorry, just wanted to share my thoughts.happy bounce 

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0athSworn Featured By Owner 2 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, fellow writer! :)

I was curious...how did you make your profile photo? :o
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Yrdenne Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Aaaae :hug:
Yay, thank you so much for the points!!!
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Meterious Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Professional Writer
You're welcome :)
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Yrdenne Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Seriously, this made my morning :hug:
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Meterious Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Professional Writer
Good, that was the aim. :)

I just wanted to make you smile in the morning. You've been so busy I figured you could use a pick me up :)

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Hachijuu Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw thank you so much for adding my work to that folder, it means a lot to meHug :happybounce: 
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Meterious Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Professional Writer
It was really good, pat yourself on the back from me :)

Thumbs up okay 
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Hachijuu Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahahaha i will, thank you
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Albek42 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017   Digital Artist
Thanks for all the faves, the watch and for showing some of my work in your post too :)
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Meterious Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017  Professional Writer
Not a problem :D. I'm sure It won't be the last time I favourite a piece of yours lol. 
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